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si usted me se olvida
10.05.04 (6:14 pm)   [edit]

IF YOU FORGET ME
pablo neruda

I want you to know one thing.

You know how this is:
if I look
at the crystal moon, at the red branch
of the slow autumm at my window,
if I touch near the fire the impalpable ash
or the wrinkled body of the log,
everything carries me to you,
as if everything that exists,
aromas, light, metals
were little boats that sail
toward those isles of yours that wait for me.

Well, now,
if little by little you stop loving me
I shall stop loving you little by little.

If suddenly
you forget me
do not look for me,
for I shall already have forgotten you.

If you think it long and mad,
the wind of banners
that passes through my life,
and you decide
to leave me at the shore
of the heart where I have roots,
remember
that on that day,
at that hour,
I shall lift my arms
and my roots will set off
to seek another land.

But
if each day,
each hour,
you feel that you are destined for me
with implacable sweetness,
if each day a flower
climbs up to your lips to seek me,
ah my love, ah my own,
in me nothing is extinguished or forgotten,
my love feeds on your love, beloved,
and as long as you live it will be in your arms
without leaving mine.

 


posted by: 14u2nv (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (2:22 am)

OMG thats the most beautiful thing I think I have ever read! Thank u for sharing!



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (2:41 am)

Reply to: 14u2nv

hey, thanks! t'was so nice of you :)

actually, i love pablo neruda's writings. he's a genius!

de nada!




posted by: Dariana (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (3:16 am)

Did you write that? Have you posted it before, it looks familiar.



posted by: Dariana (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (3:18 am)

Never mind, I just read your comments and I know why it looks familiar and who wrote it. Sorry I didn't see that earlier, just woke up, its 2:24 am and eyes refuse to work just yet, lol. Thats a great piece.



posted by: kurtmaddox (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (3:32 am)

*applause*



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (4:14 am)

Reply to: Dariana

it's ok honey! someone here might already posted that before. i just got that poem way way back. in fact, my friend has lend me before her book about pablo neruda.

thanks a bunch!



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (4:19 am)

Reply to: kurtmaddox

oh, thanks kurt!

it's nice to receive warm feedbacks from you guys! glad you loved it. :)



posted by: bluefairy (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (4:59 am)

cyrix, it's a masterpiece. strucked my heart. :-)



posted by: 14u2nv (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (8:18 am)

Reply to: CYRIX
agreed :)



posted by: AugustDC (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (10:00 am)

I can't even begin to describe how I feel about this. Wow.



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (5:40 pm)

Reply to: 14u2nv

gracias tanto! ;)





posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (5:41 pm)

Reply to: 14u2nv

gracias tanto! ;)





posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (5:55 pm)

Reply to: AugustDC

hi! nice to see you here.. thanks! btw, i enjoy talking with you. don't worry, i know soon enough you'll get over him and find a much much better replacement. hehehe! ;) and tell me when it happens :)



posted by: mo (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (6:44 pm)

Nice Song !!!
very good descriptive explanation!!
is it directed at anybody ?? hehe



posted by: Lover (reply)
post date: 10.05.04 (9:50 pm)

I crave your mouth... by Pablo Neruda

I crave your mouth, your voice, your hair.
Silent and starving, I prowl through the streets.
Bread does not nourish me, dawn disrupts me, all day
I hunt for the liquid measure of your steps.

I hunger for your sleek laugh,
your hands the color of a savage harvest,
hunger for the pale stones of your fingernails,
I want to eat your skin like a whole almond.

I want to eat the sunbeam flaring in your lovely body,
the sovereign nose of your arrogant face,
I want to eat the fleeting shade of your lashes,

and I pace around hungry, sniffing the twilight,
hunting for you, for your hot heart,
Like a puma in the barrens of Quitratue.




posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.06.04 (4:17 am)

Reply to: mo

it's a poem not a song :)
it seems to me that for you, everything i post here should have some meaning.. :D



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.06.04 (4:21 am)

Reply to: bluefairy

i was reviewing my comments here and realized that i haven't replied to you yet.
anyway, thanks.. andie, right? :)



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.06.04 (4:24 am)

Reply to: Joice

yea, i think so. :)
why are you always askin me same questions? you and mo.. hmm.. :)





posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.12.04 (2:13 pm)

Reply to: mo

what 'oopps' ?! are you guilty? :d



posted by: kurtmaddox (reply)
post date: 10.12.04 (3:57 pm)

read it again and enjoyed as much as the first time!



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.12.04 (4:35 pm)

Reply to: kurtmaddox

whew! thank you kurt :)



posted by: Paintedbat (reply)
post date: 10.12.04 (10:03 pm)

oh Wow that is great




posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.12.04 (11:29 pm)

Reply to: Paintedbat

:o)



posted by: kurtmaddox (reply)
post date: 10.15.04 (11:22 am)

i need more stuff from you my friend! :-) i already have the poem memorized.



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.16.04 (12:37 am)

Reply to: kurtmaddox

haha! i know.. it's just that i always tend to be so lazy. :D



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.16.04 (10:57 am)

Reply to: mo

heheh! would it be better if you'd just tell me your secret? whatcha think?? :D



posted by: Joice (reply)
post date: 10.17.04 (3:23 pm)

Reply to: mo
Hi there! 'Hope this one helps...



posted by: mo (reply)
post date: 10.18.04 (5:35 pm)

Ok ..friends ...thanks for your help. iThough it seems i would have to .. accomplish this mission .. mostly by myself from now on. So now i am going to add .. A poem or a thought or a piece of writing by ME or something else which is my own creation .. in this comments thread ...till i reach my target ..thats a 100!! you are welcome to come and check it out
-mo



posted by: mo (reply)
post date: 10.18.04 (5:51 pm)

OK so this is my first creation ...

THE IGNORANT

One fine day i got up and found
that i am in this world
this beautifull, profound, deceptive
Endless world with no bound.

From that day i am just a traveller
feeling the essense of life.
The love, the hatred, the joy, the sorrow
The Pain, the suffering, the cry, the cure
i wonder which one i want, i like
to me they all look alike.
the more i live, the more i see,
but more i feel, that i don't know.

so i am living living living ..
to feel each day, each moment
and discover that i am
sooo ..IGNORANT



posted by: Joice (reply)
post date: 10.19.04 (2:26 am)

Reply to: mo
Cool poem! :)



posted by: mo (reply)
post date: 10.20.04 (2:44 am)

One fine day i got up to think and i though ..
today i am gonna discover IT, to rock this world
but what is IT, let me think and i thought ..

hey! UNIVERSE, thats my subject
The moon, The Stars, The Nebula, The black hole
Is any of these good for me, i thought ..
Nah, no way, i need something pathbreaking, you know!!

Ok, soo its the limit of universe
people say universe is vast endless, no limits at all
But how can it be, everything has to end at some place
Tunnels end, Eras end, even the big SEAS end
Go deep and you will hit the floor, go far reach the shore
So the universe should end, i think .. and i thought

But after every end something else starts
So if universe ends, what starts ?
Is it round ?, may be!, i think and i though ..
But if round, there should be something to surround
And again there is no end

Is our universe a Football and our earth a dust particle
are we viruses for some large large cute boy playing that football
And is that big boy again a germ or virus for a bigger cuter boy
And so on and on, never ending, may be, i thought ..

But still there is no limit
i still coudn't get the end, oh no, i thought ..
Who makes the laws of nature, are they same for every universe
Are the laws different for every cuter bigger boy
Can be why not, possible, i thought ..

Possible, or not, its not possible for me to find
May be you can find it,
The universe inside my mind is not very good,
May be your head has a better universe and answers
May be you can think and give me the answer
I have thought, gaped, wondered, i think ..
may be its for you to think not me, i thought ..



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 10.20.04 (3:05 am)

Reply to: mo

Bilog ang mundo! :D



posted by: Mo (reply)
post date: 10.22.04 (3:13 am)

My new poem .. don't think anybody here would understand it ..hehe

Coders are Artists

Coders are artists,they write stories and poetry
Poetry meant for coder,computer and debugger
some write code, rhyming self-explanatory
easy to update, decodable easily

some like to make it messy, some profound
but the wost coders comment it extremely carelessly
that code is useless for others and for them too,
Cause after a while when they return,
even they find it grisly Ironically



posted by: billlyryan (reply)
post date: 12.12.04 (1:36 pm)

Pablo Neruda...
I love him. I'll never be able to explain how much.
I think it's so wonderful you put something by him on here...
I think I might have something I want to share on my blog as well by him...
Gosh, I love this.



posted by: CYRIX (reply)
post date: 12.18.04 (10:55 am)

Reply to: billlyryan

yes, he's fantastic..

it's good to see you again.. looking forward to seeing a piece of him on your blog. :)



posted by: billlyryan (reply)
post date: 12.18.04 (2:16 pm)

Reply to: CYRIX
I was just thinking about you! Wow...I was reading more Neruda today and there was something he wrote that reminded me of you. If you like I'll share it with you sometime....

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