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posted by: 14u2nv (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (2:22 am) OMG thats the most beautiful thing I think I have ever read! Thank u for sharing! posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (2:41 am) Reply to: 14u2nv hey, thanks! t'was so nice of you :) actually, i love pablo neruda's writings. he's a genius! de nada! posted by: Dariana (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (3:16 am) Did you write that? Have you posted it before, it looks familiar. posted by: Dariana (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (3:18 am) Never mind, I just read your comments and I know why it looks familiar and who wrote it. Sorry I didn't see that earlier, just woke up, its 2:24 am and eyes refuse to work just yet, lol. Thats a great piece. posted by: kurtmaddox (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (3:32 am) *applause* posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (4:14 am) Reply to: Dariana it's ok honey! someone here might already posted that before. i just got that poem way way back. in fact, my friend has lend me before her book about pablo neruda. thanks a bunch! posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (4:19 am) Reply to: kurtmaddox oh, thanks kurt! it's nice to receive warm feedbacks from you guys! glad you loved it. :) posted by: bluefairy (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (4:59 am) cyrix, it's a masterpiece. strucked my heart. :-) posted by: 14u2nv (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (8:18 am) Reply to: CYRIX agreed :) posted by: AugustDC (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (10:00 am) I can't even begin to describe how I feel about this. Wow. posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (5:40 pm) Reply to: 14u2nv gracias tanto! ;) posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (5:41 pm) Reply to: 14u2nv gracias tanto! ;) posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (5:55 pm) Reply to: AugustDC hi! nice to see you here.. thanks! btw, i enjoy talking with you. don't worry, i know soon enough you'll get over him and find a much much better replacement. hehehe! ;) and tell me when it happens :) posted by: mo (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (6:44 pm) Nice Song !!! very good descriptive explanation!! is it directed at anybody ?? hehe posted by: Lover (reply) post date: 10.05.04 (9:50 pm) I crave your mouth... by Pablo Neruda I crave your mouth, your voice, your hair. Silent and starving, I prowl through the streets. Bread does not nourish me, dawn disrupts me, all day I hunt for the liquid measure of your steps. I hunger for your sleek laugh, your hands the color of a savage harvest, hunger for the pale stones of your fingernails, I want to eat your skin like a whole almond. I want to eat the sunbeam flaring in your lovely body, the sovereign nose of your arrogant face, I want to eat the fleeting shade of your lashes, and I pace around hungry, sniffing the twilight, hunting for you, for your hot heart, Like a puma in the barrens of Quitratue. posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.06.04 (4:17 am) Reply to: mo it's a poem not a song :) it seems to me that for you, everything i post here should have some meaning.. :D posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.06.04 (4:21 am) Reply to: bluefairy i was reviewing my comments here and realized that i haven't replied to you yet. anyway, thanks.. andie, right? :) posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.06.04 (4:24 am) Reply to: Joice yea, i think so. :) why are you always askin me same questions? you and mo.. hmm.. :) posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.12.04 (2:13 pm) Reply to: mo what 'oopps' ?! are you guilty? :d posted by: kurtmaddox (reply) post date: 10.12.04 (3:57 pm) read it again and enjoyed as much as the first time! posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.12.04 (4:35 pm) Reply to: kurtmaddox whew! thank you kurt :) posted by: Paintedbat (reply) post date: 10.12.04 (10:03 pm) oh Wow that is great posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.12.04 (11:29 pm) Reply to: Paintedbat :o) posted by: kurtmaddox (reply) post date: 10.15.04 (11:22 am) i need more stuff from you my friend! :-) i already have the poem memorized. posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.16.04 (12:37 am) Reply to: kurtmaddox haha! i know.. it's just that i always tend to be so lazy. :D posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.16.04 (10:57 am) Reply to: mo heheh! would it be better if you'd just tell me your secret? whatcha think?? :D posted by: Joice (reply) post date: 10.17.04 (3:23 pm) Reply to: mo Hi there! 'Hope this one helps... posted by: mo (reply) post date: 10.18.04 (5:35 pm) Ok ..friends ...thanks for your help. iThough it seems i would have to .. accomplish this mission .. mostly by myself from now on. So now i am going to add .. A poem or a thought or a piece of writing by ME or something else which is my own creation .. in this comments thread ...till i reach my target ..thats a 100!! you are welcome to come and check it out -mo posted by: mo (reply) post date: 10.18.04 (5:51 pm) OK so this is my first creation ... THE IGNORANT One fine day i got up and found that i am in this world this beautifull, profound, deceptive Endless world with no bound. From that day i am just a traveller feeling the essense of life. The love, the hatred, the joy, the sorrow The Pain, the suffering, the cry, the cure i wonder which one i want, i like to me they all look alike. the more i live, the more i see, but more i feel, that i don't know. so i am living living living .. to feel each day, each moment and discover that i am sooo ..IGNORANT posted by: Joice (reply) post date: 10.19.04 (2:26 am) Reply to: mo Cool poem! :) posted by: mo (reply) post date: 10.20.04 (2:44 am) One fine day i got up to think and i though .. today i am gonna discover IT, to rock this world but what is IT, let me think and i thought .. hey! UNIVERSE, thats my subject The moon, The Stars, The Nebula, The black hole Is any of these good for me, i thought .. Nah, no way, i need something pathbreaking, you know!! Ok, soo its the limit of universe people say universe is vast endless, no limits at all But how can it be, everything has to end at some place Tunnels end, Eras end, even the big SEAS end Go deep and you will hit the floor, go far reach the shore So the universe should end, i think .. and i thought But after every end something else starts So if universe ends, what starts ? Is it round ?, may be!, i think and i though .. But if round, there should be something to surround And again there is no end Is our universe a Football and our earth a dust particle are we viruses for some large large cute boy playing that football And is that big boy again a germ or virus for a bigger cuter boy And so on and on, never ending, may be, i thought .. But still there is no limit i still coudn't get the end, oh no, i thought .. Who makes the laws of nature, are they same for every universe Are the laws different for every cuter bigger boy Can be why not, possible, i thought .. Possible, or not, its not possible for me to find May be you can find it, The universe inside my mind is not very good, May be your head has a better universe and answers May be you can think and give me the answer I have thought, gaped, wondered, i think .. may be its for you to think not me, i thought .. posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 10.20.04 (3:05 am) Reply to: mo Bilog ang mundo! :D posted by: Mo (reply) post date: 10.22.04 (3:13 am) My new poem .. don't think anybody here would understand it ..hehe Coders are Artists Coders are artists,they write stories and poetry Poetry meant for coder,computer and debugger some write code, rhyming self-explanatory easy to update, decodable easily some like to make it messy, some profound but the wost coders comment it extremely carelessly that code is useless for others and for them too, Cause after a while when they return, even they find it grisly Ironically posted by: billlyryan (reply) post date: 12.12.04 (1:36 pm) Pablo Neruda... I love him. I'll never be able to explain how much. I think it's so wonderful you put something by him on here... I think I might have something I want to share on my blog as well by him... Gosh, I love this. posted by: CYRIX (reply) post date: 12.18.04 (10:55 am) Reply to: billlyryan yes, he's fantastic.. it's good to see you again.. looking forward to seeing a piece of him on your blog. :) posted by: billlyryan (reply) post date: 12.18.04 (2:16 pm) Reply to: CYRIX I was just thinking about you! Wow...I was reading more Neruda today and there was something he wrote that reminded me of you. If you like I'll share it with you sometime.... |
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